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天域读后续写分析

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

SweatdrippedfromCalliesfaceasshehelpedherbigbrotherBriggsloadhaybales(干草捆)ontotheconveyor(输送机).Shewasntstrongenoughtoliftthemherself,butshecouldatleasthelpdragthemintoplace.Themachinechatterednoisilywhileitcarriedthebalesuptothehayloft,whereCalliesdadstackedthem.

AllwasquietwhenCalliewentinsidetofeedthehorses.Butasshefilledthewaterbuckets,shethoughtsheheardafaintmeowfromthehayloft.Sheclimbedthestepstotheloftandlistened.Thesoundseemedtobecomingfrombehindthebales.SherantogetherdadandBriggs.Briggscockedhishead.“Itscomingfromoutside,”hedetermined.“Justabirdinatree.”Calliesdadagreed.“Howdoyouknowforsure?”Calliesaid.“Iguesswevejustgotbetterearsthanyou,”Briggsjoked.

ButCalliewasntconvinced.Shecheckedthehayloftagainaftersupper.“Areyoustuckinthere,kitty?”shesaid,pressinganeartothebales.Callieracedbacktothehouse.“Ihearditagain,Dad!Willyoupleaselistenoncemore??”“Allright,Cal,”herdadsaid,turningofftheTV.“Illgocheckwhileyougetreadyforbed.”Afewminuteslater,DadpokedhisheadintoCalliesroom.“TheonlythingIheardouttherewasascreechowl,”hesaid.“Sostopworrying.”“OK,Dad,”Calliesaid.“Thanksforchecking.”

Butshewokeinthenightthinkingaboutwhatshedheard.Whatifakittenwastrappedbehindthebales?Shelayonherback,wonderingwhattodo.Finally,shegrabbedaflashlightandcreptintothebarn.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Onceinthebarn,sheshinedtheflashlightsbeamtowardtheladder.

Finally,Calliepickedupthescaredkittenfromthecornerofthehayloft.

分析：

Shewasntstrongenoughtoliftthemherself

这边说明女孩是一个手无缚鸡之力的小女孩，后面可以用矛盾修辞法说明她帮助小猫的决心微信公众号ClassroomMissYan

shethoughtsheheardafaintmeowfromthehayloft.Sheclimbedthestepstotheloftandlistened.Thesoundseemedtobecomingfrombehindthebales.

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