专题09：书面表达-2023年广东省广州市11区中考英语一模及名校模拟试题分类汇编（解析版）.docxVIP

专题09：书面表达

2023年广东省广州市11区中考英语一模及名校模拟试题分类汇编（解析版）

一、书信作文

1．（2023·广东广州·海珠区统考一模）在“共建美丽多彩校园”活动中，校长鼓励全校学生为此活动提建议。假设你是九年级学生王华，请根据以下提示，写一封信给校长，跟他谈谈学校存在的问题和你的建议。

注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；

2.词数80词左右（信件的基本格式和开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

DearHeadmaster,

IamastudentofGrade9.Iamexcitedtoparticipateinthe“BuildingaBeautifulandColourfulCampusTogether”activity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Respectfully,

WangHua

【答案】例文

DearHeadmaster,

IamastudentofGrade9.Iamexcitedtoparticipateinthe“BuildingaBeautifulandColourfulCampusTogether”activity.First,Iwouldliketotalkabouttheproblemsofourcampus.

Theschoolroadsarenotveryclean,andtherearenotenoughtreeswhichcanprovideshadeinsummerandmaketheschoolmorebeautiful.Inaddition,therearefewafter-schoolactivitiesforustotakepartin,whichcanhelpusoutofthestressofhardstudy.What’smore,somefacilitiesandequipmentatschoolareold,suchascomputersandprojectors.

Herearemysuggestions.Firstofall,Ihopethatwecandosomethingtomaketheenvironmentmorepleasantandbeautiful,suchasplantingmoretrees,repairingschoolbuildingsandimprovingschoolroads.Secondly,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities,suchaslecturesandcompetitionssothatwecanhavemoreopportunitiestoshowourtalentsandabilities.Itcanalsohelpusrelaxourselves.Lastbutnotleast,updatetheteachingandclassroomequipmentinordertoimprovetheeffectofteachingandlearning.

Iwillfeelveryhappyifmyadviceistaken.Ihopeourcampuswillbemorebeautifulandcolourful.

Respectfully,

WangHua

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