高级商务英语写作（第二版）-教师用书.pdf

Unit1Overview

ClassroomPractice

(P9)

1.WearewritingtoremindyouthatthepaymentforcontractNo.ABC2234should

havebeenpaidbeforetheendofNovemberanditisoverdue.Pleasearrangeto

paywithintwodays.Pleaseinformusifthereisanythingwecanhelp.

2.Wearesorrytotellyouthatthegoodsdeliveredtoyouweremeanttoanother

clientbutwereplacedinyourparcelbymistake.Wehavedeliveredyourorder

andyouwillreceivetheminoneweek.Sorryagainforthemistake.

(P13)

Openanswers.

Task-basedExercises

1.

Informationcontrol

1)TheRecommendationsshouldbeplacedaftertheConclusions.

2)Point“3.d.”shouldnothavebeenincluded.

Languagecontrol

1)Thestyleofthesentence,I’vebeenaskedto…intheTermsofReferenceisfartoo

personal.

2)In“4.b.”thewordmustcreatesahardtonethatisinappropriateforaddressingthe

vice-presidentofpersonnel.

Presentationtechniques

1)Conclusionsshouldnotbeindentedinsection5.

2)Thereisinconsistencyinbracketingornotbracketingtheletters.

2.

August12,2024

PersonnelServicesOfficer

NorthCoastCommunityCollegeDistrict

2154RidgeDrive

Bend,OR97701

DearPersonnelServicesOfficer:

IamapplyingforthepositionofCollegeCommunicationsCoordinatorat

WoodhillCollege.Enclosedaremyresumeandseverallettersofrecommendation.

Insteadofastatementontheroleofacollegecommunicationscoordinator,Iam

enclosingreprintsoftwoarticlesIwrotethatspelloutmystrongfeelingsabout

theneedforqualityeducationandaccessforalltotheseeducationalopportunities.

Ihopeyouwon’tmindthesubstitution.

Ibelievethatpeoplewhospeakforthecollegeshavetounderstandpublicpolicy

andthebudget.Theymustbeabletoexplaintheseissuestotaxpayersinterms

theyunderstand,otherwise,financialsupportforthecollegeswillcontinueto

erode.

Acollegeinformationofficer’smainjobistomakethepublicawareofthemany

worthwh