读后续写：关于愧疚、成长与行动（玫瑰花田） 讲义--高考英语复习写作专项 .pdf

读后续写：关于愧疚、成长与行动（玫瑰花田）讲义

读后续写（（2025年深圳一模读后续写））

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，之构成一篇完整的短

文。

ThecarturnedontothefamiliarroadthatledtoGrandmasfarm.Jude,this

summerholidaywillbeagreatchanceforyoutostaywithyourgrandma/Dadsaidas

hedrove.Everymoment,weweremovingfartherawayfromthecity,theplacewhere

Iknewhowtodothingsright.

ThecarenginewasntoffbeforeGrandmahuggedme.Islowlydraggedmyself

outofthecar.Jude,youlookunhappy.Why?Grandmaasked.Sheactedlikenothing

badhadhappenedlasttime.CouldIaskhowmuchmoneyherneighborMr.Jackson

hadlostbecauseofmymistake?Washestillupsetwithme?”Imfine/Ianswered.

Imjustmissingmycomputercamp.ComputersaresomethingImgoodat.That

soundsdisappointing/Grandmanodded.

IlikedvisitingthefarmduringbreaksbeforeImessedthingsuplastsummer.

Grandmalivedalone,andMr.Jacksonwaslikefamilytoher.ThenonedayIforgotto

lockthegateandletthegoatsintohisflowerbeds.Helostalmostallhisrosesforthe

farmersmarket.

Now,backatthefarm,Ifeltnervous.IwastryingtohideintheroomwhenI

sawMr.Jackson!HewasopeningthedoorandcallingGrandma.Ineedhelp!”he

yelledtoher.Justasecondforthefreshlyharvestedroses!Thatwaswhenhesaw

me.Ifeltmyhearttightenandwasreadyforhiscriticism.Ideservedit.Hehad

probablybeenwaitingforthismomentsincelastsummer.

However,Mr.Jacksongreetedmehappily/Great,Judeishere!Yourgrandma

alwaystellsusyouareawonderfullycompetent（有能力的）computerprogrammer.I

shookmyhead.Iamnotcompetent.IamsorryImessedthingsup.Hewassurprised

andcomfortedme,“Itwasanaccident.Beingcompetentdoesntmeanyounever

makemistakes.

Ilookedoutofthewindow.Therewerepilesofroseswaitingtobesold.Jude,

canyouhelpus?