北师大版高一英语必修一unit3 Writing Tomb sweeping Day(共28张PP.pptVIP

ByGuoQingFromNo22.SeniorHighSchoolWritingTomb-sweepingDay

TheSpringFestivalTheLanternsFestivalTheMid-autumnFestivalTheDragonBoatFestival

Tomb-sweepingDay

Response-testinggametheColdFoodFestival/theHanshiFestival.JieZituiandhismotherwereburnttodeathbyfire.Itoriginatedfrom

burnincenseclearawayweedsaroundthetombs

visitthegravesofone’sancestors/deadfamilymemberspayrespecttothedead

addfreshsoiltothetombsetoutofferingsoffoodanddrinks

plantwillowtreesflykites

ImproveyourwritingGradeyourwritingCriteriaHowtogradeandimproveyourwriting?

List5criteriaweusedtogradeawritingRevision

①②③timehistorycustomsactivitiesfoodlayoutcontent+5+5④

ThesimplepresentThesimplepasttensevoicePassivevoice+5____________________________

clauseslinkingwords+3________________________________________________________

Fewgrammaticalandspellingmistakes+3

Criteria1351.ArrangethelayoutofTomb-sweepingDaywell(文章布局合理)2.ContainenoughinformationandusetheexpressionswelearntaboutTomb-sweepingDaycorrectly(文章内容丰满,能正确运用前面所学的词汇、句型)3.Usethetenseandvoicecorrectlyinwriting(正确使用时态和语态)4.Usesomelinkingwordsandclausestomakethewritingsmooth(使用适当的连词和从句使文章简洁流畅)5.Fewgrammaticalandspellingmistakes(极少的语法和拼写错误)Handwriting(additional1-3)（附加分:书写工整）Totalscore

Criteria1351.ArrangethelayoutofTomb-sweepingDaywell(文章布局合理)2.ContainenoughinformationandusetheexpressionswelearntaboutTomb-sweepingDaycorrectly(文章内容丰满,能正确运用前面所学的词汇、句型)3.Usethetenseandvoicecorrectlyinwriting(正确使用时态和语态)4.Usesomelinkingwordsandclausestomakethewritingsmooth(使用适当的连词和从句使文章简洁流畅)5.Fewgrammaticalandspellingmistakes(极少的语法和拼写错误)Handwriting(additional1-3)（附加分:书写工整）Totalscore√√√√√223

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