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八年级上册英语作文范文

一、记叙文：描述人物(DescribingaPerson)

范文题目：MyBestFriend

MyBestFriend

Amongallmyfriends,Lilyistheonewhostandsoutthemost.Sheisofmediumheightwithacheerfulsmilethatalwayslightsupherface.WhatIadmiremostaboutherisherkindnessandhelpfulnature.

Inmyeyes,Lilyismorethanafriend;sheislikeasister.Herpositiveattitudetowardslifeandwillingnesstohelpothersmakeherarolemodelforme.Ifeelincrediblyluckytohavesuchawonderfulfriend.

写作点评：

*结构清晰：文章采用总分总结构。开头点明主旨——介绍最好的朋友Lily及其突出品质；中间部分通过具体事例（帮助学习、共同爱好）展开描述，使人物形象丰满；结尾总结感受，升华友谊。

*细节描写：通过“mediumheight”、“cheerfulsmilethatalwayslightsupherface”等外貌和神态描写，以及“patientlyexplains”、“spenthourshelping”等动作描写，使Lily的形象跃然纸上。

*词汇与句型：运用了“standsout”,“admire”,“excelin”,“encounterdifficulties”,“dedication”,“fascinating”,“broadenedmyhorizons”,“rolemodel”等较高级词汇和短语。句型方面，使用了状语从句（wheneverIencounter...）、定语从句（thebookswe’veread）等，体现了语法知识的运用能力。

*情感真挚：通过具体事件的叙述，如生病时的帮助，自然流露出对朋友的感激和珍视之情，情感表达真实可信。

二、说明文：介绍爱好(IntroducingaHobby)

范文题目：MyHobby:PlayingBasketball

MyHobby:PlayingBasketball

Hobbiesareimportantinourlivesastheybringusjoyandhelpusrelax.Amongvariousactivities,playingbasketballismyfavoritehobby.Ithasbeenasignificantpartofmylifeforseveralyears.

Playingbasketballoffersmenumerousbenefits.Physically,ithelpsmestaystrongandhealthy,improvingmyspeedandcoordination.Mentally,itteachesmehowtoworkeffectivelywithothersasateammember,howtostaycalmunderpressure,andhowtolearnfromfailures.Scoringabasketorwinningagamegivesmeagreatsenseofachievement.

Basketballisnotjustagametome;it’sawayoflifethatteachesmevaluablelessons.Itmakesmemoreenergeticandconfident.Iwillcontinuetoplaybasketballandenjoythehappinessitbrings.

写作点评：

*紧扣主题：全文围绕“打篮球”这一爱好展开，从爱好的起源、日常活动到带来的益处，层层递进，中心突出。

*逻辑连贯：使用了“Amongvariousactivities”,“Atfirst”,“Now”