Unit1+Time+to+Relax话题作文句式拓展训练2025-2026学年人教版八年级英语下册.docxVIP

Unit1TimetoRelax话题作文句式拓展训练

一、开头段（引入爱好，点明核心）

核心句式：总述爱好对成长的意义→点明自己最喜欢的课余活动，呼应标题。

1.基础句（主谓宾/主系表核心结构）

Hobbiesareimportantforourgrowth.Myfavoritefree-timeactivityis__________(活动名称，如：doingcalligraphy/readingbooks).

拓展方向1：优化句式，贴合范文开头表达

Hobbiesplayanimportantroleinourgrowth.Forme,myfavoritefree-timeactivityis__________(活动名称).

拓展方向2：补充情感修饰，强化主观态度

Hobbiesplayanimportantroleinourgrowth.Theymakeourfreetimecolorful.Forme,myfavoritefree-timeactivityis__________(活动名称),whichbringsmemuchjoy.

拓展方向3：丰富开篇质感，衔接下文经历

Hobbiesarenotonlyawaytokilltimebutalsohelpfulforourgrowth.Forme,myfavoritefree-timeactivityis__________(活动名称),andithasbecomeanimportantpartofmylife.

二、中间段（讲述经历+分点说原因，3个核心要点）

核心句式：先讲述接触爱好的契机与初期经历→用“First/Second/Finally”分点说明喜欢的原因，每点遵循“原因+具体感受/影响”逻辑，从基础描述逐步拓展细节。

1.铺垫：接触经历与初期感受

基础句：Ifirststarted__________(活动名称)whensomeonetaughtme.Itwasdifficultatfirst.

拓展方向1：补充具体细节

Ifirststarted__________(活动名称)when__________(人物，如：mygrandmother/myteacher)taughtmeto__________(具体动作，如：writeapoem/drawapicture).Atthattime,Ispenthours__________(初期练习内容，如：practicingsinglestrokes/drawingbasiclines).Althoughitwasdifficultatfirst,Inevergaveup.

拓展方向2：丰富情感，强化经历的真实性

Ifirstgottoknow__________(活动名称)whenmygrandmothertaughtmetowriteapoem.Atthattime,Ispenthourspracticingsinglestrokescarefullyeveryday.Althoughitwastiringanddifficultatfirst,Iwasdeeplyattractedbyitandnevergaveup.

2.原因阐述

基础句：Ilike__________(活动名称)forseveralreasons.Itmakesmehappy.Ithelpsmelearnsomething.

拓展方向1：分点规范表达，补充具体感受

Ilike__________(活动名称)forseveralreasons.First,itmakesmefeel__________(感受，如：peaceful/relaxed).WhenIfocusonit,Iforgetallmyworries.Second,Ienjoy__________(相关细节，如：thesmelloftheink/thebeautifulstoriesinbooks)becauseitremindsmeof__________(关联事物，如：traditionalChineseculture/myhappychildh