高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练15（教师版）.docxVIP

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练15

一、环境氛围类（奠定基调）

1.高分句式：As+自然现象,感官细节+主角动作（情景联动）

2.高分句式：With+环境动态（名词+doing）,主语+状态/动作（伴随场景）

3.高分句式：Under+特定环境,环境细节+主角反应（场景聚焦）

?描写练习1：随着晚霞染红天边，海边的风裹着咸湿的气息吹过，女孩把脚伸进微凉的海水里，轻轻踢起浪花。

?英文翻译1：______________________________________,theseabreezeblewwithasaltydampsmell.Thegirldippedherfeetintothecoolseawaterandgentlykickedupwaves.

?描写练习2：树叶在秋风中簌簌飘落，爷爷坐在院中的石凳上，手里握着旧茶壶，静静看着孙辈在树下追逐打闹。

?英文翻译2：__________________________________,Grandpasatonthestonebenchintheyard,holdinganoldteapotandquietlywatchinghisgrandchildrenchaseandplayunderthetree.

?描写练习3：在昏暗的电影院灯光下，银幕上的剧情渐入高潮，男孩悄悄握紧了身旁女孩的手。

?英文翻译3：__________________________________,astheplotonthescreenreacheditsclimax,theboyquietlyheldthehandofthegirlnexttohim.

答案：

Asthesunsetdyedtheskyred

Withleavesrustlingdownintheautumnwind

Underthedimcinemalights

段落一

Lilyhadbeenlookingforwardtothebeachtripwithherfamilyformonths.Whentheyfinallyarrived,thesunwasalreadysinkinglow.(1)__________________________________(随着晚霞染红天边),theseabreezeblewwithasaltydampsmell.Thegirldippedherfeetintothecoolseawaterandgentlykickedupwaves.Herlittlebrotherranaroundcollectingseashellsnearby,(2)__________________________________(父母则坐在沙滩上聊天).Later,theybuiltasmallsandcastletogether,andbythetimetheyfinished,thefirststarhadstartedtotwinkleinthedarkeningsky—(3)__________________________________________(莉莉觉得这是她度过的最美好的一个傍晚).

答案：

Asthesunsetdyedtheskyred

whileherparentssatonthesandchatting

Lilythoughtthiswasthemostbeautifuleveningshe’deverhad

段落二

WeekendsatGrandpa’shousewerealwaysTom’sfavorite.EverySaturdaymorning,hewouldhelpGrandpawatertheflowers,andintheafternoon,they’dsitintheyardandlistentooldradioshows.(1)__________________________________(树叶在秋风中簌簌飘落),Grandpasatonthestonebenchintheyard,holdinganoldteapotandqu