2011年四校联考大作文笔记要点.docVIP

2011年四校联考大作文笔记要点 概要要点： 1. 人称：第三人称 , Tom’s father / the writer’s father, Tom / the writer / author 2. 时态：did 3. 内容要点： 1) Father used to do housework. 2) be asked to wash dishes 3) refuse / be unwilling to / be reluctant at first 4) agree / accept, come to realize, take on his responsibility at home 1. 你觉得现在孩子做家务的情况如何 （略） Actually, many children today seldom do housework. As a matter of fact, fewer and fewer children take on responsibility of doing housework. (supporting details: the only child, be spoiled, do everything for them; be burdened with schoolwork; take it for granted that their parents should …; be addicted to computer games, lack a sense of responsibility) 2. 你认为孩子在家是否需承担家务的责任 （次详） Personally speaking, it is necessary for children to shoulder the responsibility of doing housework at home. As far as I’m concerned, children are supposed to help their parents do household chores at home. For one thing, …. For another, …. / For example, …. (不合适：On one hand, …. On the other hand, ….用于连接相反的两方面) (Supporting details: 1. reasons: a member of the family, take one’s role in the housework; help parents share the housework, give parents chances to relax themselves; an important life skill, take care of oneself in the future 2. examples: do some cleaning, do some washing, do some cooking, tidy one’s room, sweep the floor) 佳句示范： Only when a student strikes a balance between study and housework can he become a real all-rounded person. And they also serve as a bridge to the future social life. Doing the chores regularly, theyll become mature and responsible. 3. 以你自己或他人的体验，说明承担家务责任对孩子成长带来的影响 （详） Take one of my friends, Mike / myself for example. The story reminds me of one of my friends, Mike’s / my own experiences, which can further prove that doing housework has a great effect on one’s growth. (Supporting details: used to be lazy, never did housework, didn’t understand parents’ hardship, had to do, from then on, take care of myself and other family members, le