写作亮点.ppt

高分作文标志 1、是否长短句交叉；主动被动语态交替。 2、是否会使用插入语； 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 6、卷面是否工整。 经典的替换词 individuals, characters, folks 代替(people ,persons) positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding 代替good 表示好处 1）It has the following advantages．2）It does us a lot of good．3）It benefits us quite a lot．4）It is beneficial to us． 5）It is of great benefit to us． ??例如： ? Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better， and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore， reading extensively is of great benefit to us．  It does us much harm．  It is harmful to us． 范文 Good Health （1） Importance of good health （2） Ways to keep fit （3） My own practice  开头 保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务，第二个重要任务就是条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚。对于说明文来说，1、2、3条要清楚，对于描述文要来，谁干什么要清楚。 就拿上例Good Health来说，第一段（Importance of good health）保持正反面要清楚就应这样写：主题句（It is very important to have good health.,正面（With good health, we can...）,反面(Without good health, we can do nothing. We cant do...)  Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. -Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can do some sports exercises in the afternoon. And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to music. - And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popular and classic music. 　　这样一来，我们只要保持本句的主题不变加添一些次要词就能达到字数的规定标准。 插入语 写作中阅卷人喜欢的句式有以下两种 　　第一，插入语。 　　所谓插入语，英语中有两种形式。一种是有两个逗号之间引起的成分称之为插入语；第二种是有两个半破折号引起的成分称之为插入语。如下所示（黑体划线处）： 　　Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city. 　　however, therefore, for example等 　　Some hold the opinion that… 换成Other individuals, however, take the attitude that… 　　 插入语的作用主要有两个，一个是突出主语，比如说：He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student. 　　第二个作用是解释说明，比如说：People, especially students, should work hard. 倒装 Only + 时间状语?????? Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all leve