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TOEFL写作 常见问题解决办法及心得 　　语言的疏漏是让你的托福写作停留在二流水平的一个最根本的原因之一，据多位资深教师总结为考生整理托福写作中的七个语法错误，希望大家能规避这些错误，让你的托福写作上一个台阶。 　　1. 用词不当 　　原文：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society. 　　改正：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society. 　　评：groupwork是分组或者小组集体任务的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork团队合作，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。 　　2. 搭配错误 　　原文：Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent. 　　改正：Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence. 　　评：这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。 　　3.词性错位 　　原文：I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study. 　　改正：I will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study. 　　评：sad是形容词，而这里明显需要一个名词，应该是sadness。 　　4. 时态混乱 　　原文：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job. 　　改正：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job. 　　评：过去时的句子中冒出了现在时，同学你太粗心了，要仔细检查哦~ 　　5. 主谓不一致 　　原文：The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being. 　　改正：The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being. 　　评：谓语之前有两个名词时，主谓搭配的问题就常常出现了。这里真正的主语应该是单数名词the way，所以与之搭配的谓语也应该是单数的is。 　　6. 重复累赘 　　原文：From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country. 　　改正：From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country. 　　评：from my point of view和I think重复啦，保留一个就好。当然这里建议留下更高级的from my point of view. 　　7. 中式英语 　　原文：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses attention and gain appreciation. 　　改正：Thus, its easier for you to draw bosses attention and gain appreciation. 　　评：中文习惯说人们可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力，而英语则习惯说Its easier for sb. to…同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别哦! 托福写作是考察学生综合英语素质的考题，因此短时间内提高托福写作，实现高分突破很难，但是掌握一定的技巧，从根本上踢出一些常见的低级错误，相信最终你可以战胜自己，并且取得理想的托福写作高分突破。 　　 更多的留学资讯请关注傲途出国公众号：aotuliuxue 来源:傲途出国官网 　　傲途出国语言培训 　　培训老师：张瑜