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四种测试形式的范文赏析 ?1． 段首句作文赏析 What Would Happen If There Were No Power? 1) Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. 2) If there were no electric power… 3) Therefore… ? Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. It has played a decisive role in modern industry, agriculture, science and technology, national defense and education. Nobody can deny that the development of our civilization depends on electricity. If there were no electric power, our modern world would be in trouble. For one thing, our industry would stop working since most of the machines are driven by electricity. For another, our communication such as telephone, telegraph and fax would break down. In short, our modern life would be impossible without electricity. Therefore, we should make better use of electric power. We should educate people to economize using electricity and not to waste the energy resources without considering the future. At the same time we must do our best to exploit more electric resources to meet the requirements of the human beings and to avoid energy crisis in the future. ?[赏析] 作者在第一段用事实陈述法指明了电的重要性;第二段作者笔锋一转，做出了一种假设，直入主题，是全文的重点。并用举例法，从反面论证电在现代生活中的重要性。第三段作者提出了节约用电，开发电力资源的主张以满足人对电的需求和避免将来的能源危机。 ? Punctuality ? 1. Punctuality means observing regular or appointed time. 2. Punctuality is a good habit, and unpunctuality is of course a bad one. 3. Those who are unpunctual should… ? Punctuality means observing regular or appointed time. A man who gets up at six every morning is punctual. A man who has promised to call on a friend at five o’clock in the afternoon and actually does so at that hour is also punctual. Punctuality is a good habit, and unpunctuality is of course a bad one. A few minutes delay may not be a serious matter. But it may have had bad results. Getting up five minutes later than usual may upset the plan of the day. Calling on a friend five minutes later than the appo