初中英语书面表达写作.pptVIP

认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 审 1.麦兜和他的妈妈居住在香港； 2.妈妈送麦兜到武当山学艺。 3.通过自己的努力，麦兜最后学有所成，并且赢得比赛。 1.a pig named Mai Dou 2.live in 3.Even though 4. in order to 5.decide to do 6.send sb to do sth.7.it’s adj to do sth 8.be interested in 9.in the end 10.win the price 11.what a adj N! 连(连词成句) 加(润色) 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 美 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。 Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream. Skill Two Express in different ways 中考作文评分标准 第一档（21-25分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（15-20分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（10-14分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（5-9分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-4分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 * * 初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导 洪冠二中 张庆波 陈芷荧(丹丹) My name is Wang lei. I like watch film. My favourites is Mai Dou. I usually go to cinema watch the Mai Dou. Mai Dou and him mother live in Hong Kong. Then ,him mother send Mai Dou to Wu Dang mountains studied. Mai Dou studying was very hard in Wu Dang mountains. In the end, Mai Dou studied to many thing in Wu Dang mountains. Then, Mai Dou left Wu Dang mountains. He was joined a match. At last ,He win the match. I like Mai Dou ,because the film tell me should study hard. My name is Wang lei. I like watching film. My favorites film is Mai Dou. I usually go to cinema to watch the Mai Dou. Mai Dou and him mother live in Hong Kong. Then ,him mother send Mai Dou to Wu Dang mountains studied. Mai Dou studying was very hard in Wu Dang mountains. In the end, Mai Dou studied to many thing in Wu Dang mountains. Then, Mai Dou left Wu Dang mountains. He was joined a match. At last ,He win the match. I like Mai Dou ,because the film tell me that I should study hard. ---- his lived ---- his sent Mount Wudang to study studied harder than his classmate learned many things in Mount Wudang Mount Wudang ---- won 写作第一步 审 假如你叫王磊，你最喜欢的一部电影叫《麦兜》。请根据下列提示内容，写一篇