谈基于“过程”的英语写作教学.ppt

语言 思维 拼写与标点 词汇、措辞 语法结构正确性与多样性 句子（信息点）之间 段落层次清楚 内容的思想性和独创性 请思考 为什么第二篇语言不比第一篇差，但分数却低得多呢？ 第一篇字迹清楚，卷面整洁。 第一篇由于用了较多的连接词每段内的条理更清楚，一目了然。 第一篇段落分得很清楚，而第二篇最后一段…… 一目了然，一清二白很重要。 Earthquakes 例1：M1U4 1. Strange things ______ (happen) in the countryside of northeast Hebei. For three days … 2. In the farmyards, the chickens and ______ the pigs were too nervous to eat. (also; even) 3. In the farmyards, the chickens and even the pigs were too ______ to eat. (nervous; frightened) 4. Mice ran out of the fields ______ places to hide. (looking for; to look for) 5. But ______ one million people of the city were asleep as usual that night. (the; /) 6. But the one million people of the city, who thought little of these ______, were asleep as usual that night. (things; events) 7. In fifteen terrible seconds a large city ______ in ruins. (was; lay) 8. The ______ of the people was extreme. (suffering; pain) 9. The wells now ______ sand instead of water. (were full of; were filled with) 10. Some of the rescue workers and doctors were ______ under the ruins. (trapped; buried) A Night The Earth _________ Sleep Didn’t Couldn’t 例2：M7U2：Robots (1) He _____ her _____ in his arms and she felt the warmth of his body. She _________, pushed him away and ran to her ______ for the rest of the day. (2) At that moment, Tony ______ his arms around her, bending his face close to hers. She _________ “Tony” and then heard him declare that … (3) Then she remembered – Tony was just a machine. She _______ “Leave me alone” and ran to her ____. She _____ all night. held firmly screamed room folded cried out shouted bed cried 4、从写作的角度指导学生灵活选择词汇与语法 (1) Last week a tennis ball hit me on the head, but I tried to _______ the pain, believing that it would go away sooner or later. （14浙江,7） A. share B. realize C. ignore D. cause (2) We most prefer to say yes to the ______ of someone we know and like. （14浙江,6） A. attempts B. requests