尚美学堂高一英语写作复习解析.ppt

高考英语写作 题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式给予答复。 活动时间 7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日 活动内容 参加英语角/ 学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座/ 表演英语短剧 看英语电影/ 教外教学中文 对活动内容的建议或要求 注意： 1. 选择适合你的时间并说明理由。 2. 选择两项你喜欢的活动并说明理由。 3. 对活动的内容提出至少一个建议或要求。 4. 词数100左右。 5. 信的开头和结尾已经给出。 考 生 作 品 Dear Sir or Madam, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in August, because I am free at that time. I like to take part in English corner and learn to sing English songs. I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others. I like English songs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities should be organized together and then we will have a good time together. Thanks a lot. Yours truly, Li Ping 完成了试题规定的任务，应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。应用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写作目的。 优点： 缺点： 没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。 参 考 范 文 Dear Sir or Madam, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because I will have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games， more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp？ Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li Ping 高分作文的标准： 完全完成了规定任务； 覆盖所有内容要点； 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力； 有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 Ⅰ英语句子的种类 简单句(the simple sentence) 并列句(the compound sentence) 复合句(the complex sentence) 请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。 1. I turned on the TV. I watched it. I turned on the TV and watched it. 2. I bought my sister a present. She