高校英语专业写作分析报告.ppt

单词使用错误 He failed as he lacked of adequate experience. He failed as he lacked adequate experience. He failed as he was lack of / in adequate experience. 单词使用错误 It is not an easy work to master a foreign language. It is not an easy job to master a foreign language. 单词使用错误 It is benefit to children. It is beneficial to children. It benefits children. 单词使用错误 I disagree many points made by the supporters of globalization. I disagree with many points made by the supporters of globalization. 单词使用错误 We have to choice a way which is suit for us. We have to choose a way which is suitable for us. We have to choose a way which suits us. 倒装平行结构错误 So popular Internet is that its impact on daily lives should not be ignored. So popular is Internet that its impact on daily lives should not be ignored. 倒装平行结构错误 Only by the cooperation we could solve the problem. Only by the cooperation could we solve the problem. 倒装平行结构错误 It is widely accepted that the process of education begins at birth and continue through life. It is widely accepted that the process of education begins at birth and continues through life. 倒装平行结构错误 The economic, society and culture importance of Olympic Games is obvious. The economic, social and cultural importance of Olympic Games is obvious. The importance of economy, society and culture of Olympic Games is obvious. 从句使用错误 The country, which economy increases quickly, attracts attention worldwide. The country, whose economy increases quickly, attracts attention worldwide. 从句使用错误 I like to make friends with some who have characters, hobbies, and social status are similar with me. I like to make friends with some who have characters, hobbies, and social status similar with me. I like to make friends with some whose characters, hobbies, and social status are similar with me. 从句使用错误 There are plenty of smokers in the world, most of that are male. There are plenty of smokers in the world, and most of them are male. There are plenty of smokers in the wor