2016届海南省琼中中学高三英语二轮复习----高三下第八次综合考试作文讲评.pptVIP

考生作文 作文讲评训练 最近，某英语交流学习论坛就话题“My Life in the Senior Year”，向高三学生征文。请你根据下面的内容要点，用英语给该论坛写一篇征文。 内容要点： 1. 高三生活概况； 2. 问题或困难； 3. 解决方法或建议。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 词汇短语：senior three student, study hard, busy, colorful, burden, pressure, sleepy/tired/exhausted, exercise, admit into the university, relax, enough time/sleep, diligent, homework, review, … 月考作文得分情况分析(Class 1) 最高分 最低分 平均分 22 1 10.9 21~25分: 1人 16~20分: 5人 11~15分:17人 6~10分: 19人 1~5分: 2人 失分原因： 1. 审题不当，要点把握不清楚； 2. 部分句子不通顺，成为词汇的堆砌或中式英语的表达； 3. 缺少高级表达。 月考作文得分情况分析(Class 8) 最高分 最低分 平均分 17 0 6.8 16~20分: 1人 6~10分: 8人 11~15分: 2人 1~5分: 20人 0分: 5人 失分原因： 1. 审题不当，要点把握不清楚； 2. 句子不通顺，只是单纯地堆砌词汇，中式英语的表达过多； 3. 缺少高级表达。 My Life in the Senior Year As a senior three student, my life is really busy but colorful. With the goal of being admitted into my ideal university, I work diligently and enjoy my school life. However, there are some problems in my life. What bothers me most is that I don’t have enough time to review, so I have to stay up late, which makes me sleepy in class the next day and also has a bad influence on my study. To solve the problem, I try to study more efficiently and sleep before 11:30 pm to have a clear mind in class. Besides, I also make time to do some sports or walk. With all the efforts, my life in senior three will be more colorful and unforgettable. My Life in the Senior Year As a senior three student, my life is extremely full and occupied. With a big dream to fulfill, I enjoy my school life, working diligently and passionately. However, I can’t deny that I am burdened with so much that I feel exhausted sometimes both physically and mentally. Too much homework takes away our time for exercise and the development of personal hobbies. My parents also push me a lot, which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us. How I wish our society would pay more attention