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用“3W+H”模式写好短文概要 　　纵观广东这几年的读写任务的阅读材料，主要以记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文为主，不管是2013年的议论文、2011年和2010年以及2012年的记叙文、还是2009年的说明文或是2007年和2008的年应用文（2008年的发言稿、2007年书信）。只要考生抓住一些主要的要素“3W+H”即：Who？What he did？Why？How it ended？来进行概要写作，就可以做到不遗漏要点。 　　下面以2013年高考题为例说明如何用“3W+H”写概要： 　　To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant， not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man， who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office， may work hard at the weekend， painting the house or digging the garden. 　　What is the reason， then？In most cases， it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy， like making up wooden boxes， but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one， such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say： I have made something！ 　　Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized. No matter how ordinary a job is， it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs. 　　分析：该材料是一篇说明文，主要包含以下3个要点，分别是每一段的段意： 　　（1）Many people find their work unpleasant. （现象） 　　（2）They can’t get real satisfaction from the jobs they are doing because they are boring and ordinary. （原因） 　　（3）We should respect ordinary workers. （作者看法） 　　写概要时，只要回答Who？ What he did？ How it ended？ Why？ 这四个问题，再把答案整合起来基本就可以了。因此，可以整理成： 　　（Who） Many people （What） find their work unpleasant and can’t get real satisfaction from their boring and ordinary jobs. However， （How） we should respect ordinary workers（Why） because every ordinary job plays a part in society. （32 words） 　　一、即时训练 　　请用“3W+H”模式写出近年高考读写任务短文的概要。 　　1. 2012年高考题 　　My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle s