高三英语二轮专题复习作文的审题训练之一.pptVIP

高考书面表达训练如何审题 图表作文审题时应考虑的几点 * You can’t get off the bus ____ it is stopping. A.before B. until C. while D. unless 不少学生都选择了B，主要是审题不清。 It is stopping.而不是It stops.这里表示在要 停车的时候，而不是车停好以后。因此 应该选择C 如何审题 1、审定体裁、 题材； 2、审定人称； 3、审定时态； 4、审定要点； 5、审定段落。 最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。 1、震惊； 2、捐款、募捐； 3、使李明返校学习； 1、学习好；品德好； 2、父病故；母病重； 3、退学； 师生情况 李明情况 注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money; 募捐collect money 示例一 1、审定体裁、题材： 2、审定人称： 3、审定时态： 4、审定要点： 5、审定段落： 审题提示: ①书信、李明的遭遇 ②第三和第一人称 ③现在时、过去时 ④9个要点(见作业纸) ⑤可分为三段 ① Li Ming was one top students of our school. ②He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. ③However, he has to leave school. ④His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. Correct mistakes if any! 学生习作2： 学生习作2： ⑤The whole school was shocked at the news and anxious about it. ⑥Quickly they decided to help him out. ⑦Every teacher and student offered money to him and some students went to look after his mother in turn. ⑧At weekends they went out to collect money. Correct mistakes if any! 学生习作3： ⑨With their help, Li Ming will return to school soon. That’s all. Thank you. Yours, Wei Fang Correct mistakes if any! Dear editor， I’m writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school. Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to collect money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has alread