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句酷批改网 关闭提示。。。 The Framework for Love Jenerally believe, just as a living organism grows from a seed in the mud to a slender trunk, love needs time. To rec ognize and appreciate our differences is also regarded as a way to keep our love. For me, love is more like an elastic band that must stretch apart before it pulls you back close one another. In the book JANE EYRE, Jane Eyre was employed at Thornfield Manor, whose owner was Edward Frairfax Rochester. One night, Jane found that Rochesters bedroom caught fire, she woke Rochester up and helped him to put out the fire. Afterwards, they fell in love. When they were about to get married, suddenly someone confirmed that Rochester had been married 15 years ago, his wife was the madwoman who had been locked in the secret room. Therefore, their love had to be prevented by the low, both of them were caught in deep pain. In this way, Jane departed from Rochester to look for her outlet. She teached at a primary school later, her cousin St. John who was a rich man asked her to merry him, nevertheless she turned him down uncompromisingly for what she loved exclusive was Rochester. She made up her mind to come back to Rochester. But to her surprise, when she returned to the manor, the manor in former days had become ruins, the madwoman had been dead and Rochester was injured seriously even became a disability. Even so, Jane married him recklessly and found her ideal life eventually. Given all that, I make a firm belief that love is like an elastic band with the scalability. It is a coming tide whose waters retreat a little after a single wave, but the next one is closer to your heart than the one before. 得分：83.5 评语： 作者词汇基本功很好，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨 类型 维度 测量值 参考范围 词汇 形符数 335 195~230 字数 296 166~208 类符数 172 93~115 平均词长 4.39 4.23~4.97 平均词长标准差 2.33 2.19~2.62 高频词汇占比 76% 77%~86% 学术词汇占比 4% 2%~7% 超纲词汇占比 9% 3%~8% 篇章连词 20 8~14 动词短语 20 7~17 段落 段落数 4 3~5 平均每段句数 3.75 2.49~