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英语书面表达夺“帅”妙法 　　【名师简介】尹继友：湖北省黄冈市拔尖人才，全国教研优秀教师，现代英语研究所研究员，全国多家英语刊物的特约编辑。主编或参与编写教辅书籍20余本，出版了个人专著《尹氏口诀英语考试必备》《尹氏英语朗朗口诀法》。 　　笔者连续多年从事高三英语教学并参加书面表达的阅卷工作，发现书面表达的平均得分都不高，现把高考书面表达阅卷的得分点和写作踩分技巧总结出来，助力2016年高考。 　　Part 1：“形”“神”不散 　　英语写作要求“形”不散，“神”也不能散，这是考生在写作文时尤其要注意的。“形”即文章的句子，“形不散”即句与句之间要连贯，句子要有变化；“神”即文章的中心，“神不散”即文章要围绕一个中心来进行写作。 　　一、骨架立体：“形”不散 　　1.使用连词、副词、过渡词语，使句与句之间连贯。 　　例1：Yesterday I got up at 7：00. I got dressed and washed myself quickly. I rushed into the living-room. My mother was preparing breakfast. I had breakfast at 7：30， I got my bike and went to school. 　　这段文字的“形”是散的，句子不连贯。这样的句子只是松散地堆积在一起，要使它们有机连贯，必须用一些词语把它们连接起来。可以改为： 　　Yesterday I got up at 7：00. Then I got dressed and washed myself quickly. I rushed into the living-room. My mother was preparing breakfast. Later I had breakfast at 7：30. After that I got my bike and went to school. 　　2.使用多种句式，使文章句子表达富于变化。在一篇文章里，既有简单句，也要有复合句，如名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句等，或非谓语结构、with独立结构等。 　　例2：On weekday’s afternoon ，we had an hour for after-class activities from 4：20 to 5：20.The activities are divided into three parts. One is called sports. Sports include ball games， track and field gym and so on. The second is recreation. It includes singing， dacing and performance. The third is science and technology. It consists of science reading， computer operating and experiments. 　　文章通篇都用同样结构的句子，显得很没有生气，千篇一律，得分较低。如果使用多种句式，表达方式多样，就显得生动、有活力。上段文字可以改为： 　　On weekday’s afternoon， we had an hour for after-class activities from 4：20 to 5：20.The activities are divided into three parts. One is called sports， including ball games， track and field gym and so on. Recreation is another part with singing， dacing and performance. The third is science and technology which consists of science reading， computer operating and experiments. 　　二、血肉丰满：“ 神 ” 不散 　　“神”不散的有效办法之一是利用主题句写作，即公式main idea = topic sentence 1 + topic sentence 2。考生首先要确定文章的中心，每段列出一个主题句，由主题句来反映文章的中心内容。其次，对每段的主题句展开写作，主题句可以由若干个分句来支撑。 　　例3： 　　Dear Tom， 　　I’m really glad to write to you.