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抓住写作要点，智取英语书面表达汉语式写作、憋不出一个高级词汇、只会用and简单句……这些书面表达中的常见问题是考生失分的症结。笔者以丰富的教学经验和高考阅卷经验告诉你，只要掌握一定的词汇和句式，按照正确的写作流程，抓住写作要点，书面表达也有速成之法。书面表达速成流程Step：审题――要点不能漏考生在下笔之前一定要明确这几个问题：题目要求是什么？是否要写标题？文章是什么体裁？有哪些要点？文章的结构如何，应分几段？用什么人称和时态？有无特殊要求？（重要的信息，最好用笔勾出来，以免出错）《求学》提醒：为什么审题如此重要？因为只有明确了写作要点才不会写偏。书面表达一定要包括所有要点，一旦遗漏要点，就容易失分。人称、时态、语态、动词错误是大错，单词拼写、大小写、标点符号、介词、冠词等是小错，三个小错等于一个大错。全文有五个或五个以上大错，文章就会不及格。Step：成文――遣词造句，打磨句式1. 拒绝贫乏的表达和低级词汇贫乏的表达往往会使文章看起来呆板，没有灵气，而运用高级、亮点词汇能让文章出彩，能给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。例1① A good relationship between teachers and students is good for our study. （is beneficial to）② It’s very important to protect our environment. （of great importance/significance）③ I think only in this way can we get on well with our teachers. （I am firmly convinced； are on good terms with）例2以下几个句子在表达“非常”这个意思时，就使用了不同的词语：① During the night， it got terribly cold.② I’m extremely sorry for the delay.③ It was a fairly good meal， and everyone enjoyed it.《求学》提醒：考生必须清楚词语的生动性是建立在准确性的基础之上的，不能单纯为了追求生动性，而选用一些浮华的词汇，也不能选用晦涩难懂的词汇。在表达多样性的前提下，写出的文章力求通顺、流畅、自然。2.从简单句蜕变到高级亮点句（1）非谓语动词结构在写作中的运用非谓语动词结构运用于写作中，能使句意简洁明快。在高考阅卷时，阅卷老师很喜欢看见有非谓语动词结构的表达，特别是看见独立主格结构时，会眼前一亮，考生的分数当然就上去了。例3① They returned from their journey. They felt very tired but they were happy.→They returned from their journey， feeling very tired and happy.② She hurried to the station， and found that the bus had left.→She hurried to the station， only to find the bus had left.③ There was no bus at that time， so we had to walk home.→There being no bus at that time， we had to walk home.（2）复合句（定从/状从/名从）在写作中的运用复合句的使用不仅能使句子结构清晰，层次分明，上下文更加流畅，同时也能充分展示考生运用较复杂语法结构的能力。例4① Protecting our environment is very important.→I’m firmly convinced that protecting our environment is very important.（宾从）→There is no doubt that protecting our environment is very important. （同从）→It’s obvious that protecting our environment is very important. （主从）② You study hard and you can succeed.→Your efforts can pay off on condition that you persist in studying hard. （ 条件状从）（3）适当运用被动句考生潜意识里习惯使用主动语态，适当使用一两个被动形式，能消除