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Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. It made our communication more and more convenience. young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them. First of all, I want to talk about its benefits . There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m .If there has no internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere .It eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us. The second, It also have some bad influence . young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Some people say,they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality. So,e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet. 1.1 Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. [教师点评] [学习提示] 易混词汇: technique, technology 均有“技术”之意。 technique: 多指具体的某种技术和技巧。technology: 含义比technique广泛，泛指生产工艺、科学技术。 好评报错 [批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish 好评报错 [批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击 好评报错 1.2 It made our communication more and more convenience. [教师点评] [学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。 communication: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。traffic: 指来往的东西的情况，表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。transportation: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处，也可指交通运输工具。 好评报错 1.3 young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them. [教师点评] [名词错误] on internet 冠词缺失 好评报错 [句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写 好评报错 [标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查 好评报错 [搭配统计] 动名搭配 munication 在教材中出现过 8 次 SeeAlso: miss communication6 好评报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need,