英语作文评讲2.pptVIP

Do They Deserve So Much 作文评讲 2 理由段的写法 　 文章开头确定了中心议题main idea 之后，接下来就是靠理由段来证明或是支持这一观点。 理由段是文章的主要组成部分，是我们的写作重点。 每个理由段由一个主题句(topic sentence)和若干个支持句(supporting sentences)构成。 主题句 主题句示例 主题句示例 主题句示例 构思主题句的思路 围绕或观点本身的优缺点来写。 围绕该事物影响或涉及的对象来写。 支持句 如果写3个理由段，支持句应该是2－3句；如果写两个理由段，则支持句应该写3－4句。 支持句大部分应该是复杂的句子。 支持句可以说理，也可以举例。 支持句之间使用连词加强连贯性。 支持句必须围绕主题写。 让步段 让步段段首应有连接词，例如： However, it cannot be denied that… On the other hand, there are some athletes abusing their money and caused bad influence on children. However, most … Of course, we must admit that in our society some people are working hard but paid less. But… Sample Answers 开头一 It is becoming a public concern that more and more star athletes enjoy not only fame but also money. From my point of view, they don’t really deserve so much. There are three major reasons to support my idea. Sample Answers 开头二(对称式） For many years, star athletes have been making a lot of money from their fame. YaoMing, is a case in point. It is reported that a NBA player like Yao earns ten million dollars every year. This phenomenon has aroused heated debate among the public: Whether they deserve so much? On such a controversial issue, people seldom reach an absolute consensus. Do they deserve so much? (对称式理由段） some people deem that compared with great scientists, star athletes don’t deserve so much. Many scientists such as YuanLongping have made great contribution to our society but they can never be as rich as those star athletes. More over, they argue that those athletes may be spoiled when rewarded with seven or eight-figure salaries. However, others claim that the money star athletes get is reasonable. For one thing, the athletes win the money and glory on the strength of their effort and talent. We should never ignore the pressure and intensity they suffered when facing fierce competitions. Besides, compared with other occupations, the athletes have comparatively short career stage. Most of them jus