《优化方案》高考英语（新课标全国卷Ⅰ）二轮复习课件：专题六短文改错.pptVIP

(2014·高考四川卷，节选)If you notice that when someone is missing or hurt，tell your teacher immediately. 【解析】　分析句子结构可知，notice后接一个宾语从句，从句的意思是完整的，所以要用that引导，故when是多余的，应该去掉。 【答案】　去掉when 三、行文逻辑错误 在高考短文改错中，有时考生会碰到词法方面和句法方面均没有错误的句子，此时就必须从行文逻辑上来判断句子的合理性。行文逻辑错误常见的有代词的指代错误,连词的逻辑意义错误等。这类错误很难被发现,而此类错误基本上都会有所涉及,所以针对这类题考生必须通过阅读全文来综合考虑。 1．代词的指代错误 代词的指代错误常见的是代词的指代对象、单复数及代词的格与文章的逻辑意义不一致，此外还有反身代词的错用等。这类错误通常较为隐蔽。 (2015·高考四川卷，节选)In fact，I don’t like to go anymore，but I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.What do you think I should do？If you were me，would you talk to him? 【解析】　根据上文可知，这里指作者的朋友们，此处代词指代错误，故him改为them。 【答案】　him→them 2．连词的逻辑意义错误 (2014·高考湖南卷，单项填空，改编)Make what you’re doing today important, and because you’re trading a day of your life for it. 【解析】　本句是祈使句。句意：让你今日所做之事重要起 来，因为你是在用一天的生命换取它。前后为因果关系。 【答案】　去掉and A (2015·高考全国卷Ⅰ)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it. B (2015·高考全国卷Ⅱ)One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. C (2014·高考全国卷Ⅰ)Nearly five years before，and with th