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Writing 假如你叫Jack,参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报编辑写一封反映调查结果。 求助对象 比例 理由 同学，朋友 58﹪ 年龄相仿，容易理解与交流 … 老师，家长 30﹪ 有爱心，有经验，可以信任 … 无 12﹪ 不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通 … 注意: 内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点及理由; 为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容; 词数150左右; 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 江苏卷高考评分标准 评分原则 1.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 2.词数过少或过多的，从总分中减去2分。 3.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5.如书写较差以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 内容+词汇、语法结构（时态、语态、句型）、连接手段 Appreciation composition I ●Recently, ’who do you turn to when in trouble’ has become the focus of the society. ● According to the research, we can see that… ● The reason why they do this is that … ● On the contrary, 12% turn to nobody. On the one hand, they aren’t willing to communicate with others; on the other hand, it is hard for them to talk with others. ● But for me, I would rather turn to parents, because… Appreciation composition II ● My own point of view is that… ● Also ,… Appreciation composition III ● Other 30 percent choose their parents and teachers because they consider them patient, experienced, trustworthy and full of love. However, statistics show that the left 12 percent find it hard to communicate with others, so they are usually alone when in need of help. Appreciation composition III ● As far as I know, the first people to turn to when we are in trouble are our parents. ● From the time we were born , they stayed for the most time in our lives with us, which made them the very persons who know us most. Appreciation composition III ●They understand our joys and sorrows , offering us the warmest hug and love wherever we go and whatever we do. ● I won’t deny the help from our classmates and friends. ● In a word,… 一.定基调 体裁 人称 时态 二.找要点 三.写短语 四.写句子 五.写文章 写 作 步 骤 Writing 2008 江苏 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener”的英语演讲稿。 为何倾听 表示尊重， 增进理解， 建立良好的人际关系 谁来倾听 家长倾听孩子 理解孩子， 消除代沟…… 老师倾听学生