6_22016年中考英语作文训练(优生辅导).pptVIP

Writing Lesson —— 写作训练 ;;2010-2015年中考英语书面表达题分析;近几年中考作文发展趋向及答题要求;楚雄市统测八年级满分作文;一 档 ( 8 - 10 分)内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、 基本无语言错误； 二 档（6 - 7分）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少； 三 档（4 - 5分）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达较多错误； 四 档 ( 1 - 3 分)有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。 (注意：抄袭卷中阅读材料的，抄袭部分不给分。);第三节书面表达(满分l5分) I Am Not a Child Any More 提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以‘‘I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。;I Am Not a Child Any More I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said: “Dear, you have grown up.” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.;范文 “骨架”—— 常用句型等;中考英语书面表达“五步曲”;3、一般将来时——表达想法和愿望;②技巧二：确定关键词句 用对三种句型;③技巧三：列出提纲 用上三个从句;④技巧四：用好三类连词将“三段式” 作文连段成文;⑤技巧五：凸显三处亮点 美化文章 ;;看 （Look）;remember;;Wonderful sentences;An Unforgettable Thing; I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, with a gentle smile, she had a heart-to-heart talk with me about how to learn English well. Teacher’s smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. At that moment, happiness was from the bottom of heart. Every time I wanted to give up , she encouraged me with the brightest smile. ;It made me try my best again. Since then, she has kep