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第二单元写作-有详有略 详略得当 章来源 m 第二单元写作-有详有略详略得当 [训练目的] 1、记事写人做到有详有略、详略得当。 2、明确详略与中心思想的关系。 [训练题目] 1、以“在双休日里”为题，写一篇记叙文，做到有详有略。 2、以“我喜欢夏季”为题，写一篇记叙文，做到详略得当。 3、课外练笔：随时将自己对生活、对学习、对周围的人或事的感受写下来，可以三言两语，也可以独立成篇。 [训练指导] 1题规定了取材的范围，记叙发生在双休日的事。写作的对象是自己，还是他人，所写的内容是学校生活、家庭缝生活，还是社会生活，题目中未作限定，其实筘均可。当然，多数学生首先考虑的可能是自己郏在双休日里的生活。不管记叙何人、何事，文客章应确立一个明确的中心意思。中心意思一经确定，根据表现中心意思的需要去选择材料，蹩有详有略地记叙。写作本题，切忌平庸。不要流水账般记叙双休日的生活内容。如何写出新意，要好好构思。 2题，要求学生写夏季Э，写出对夏季的喜爱之情。夏季里可写的人、会事、景、物很多，题中的一段文学描述，对学龚生如何取材，写些什么内容已作了启示。如何写好本题，要注意三点：①“喜欢”是贯串全邢文的中心，无论写夏季的何种景物，都要写出自己的感受，表现对夏季的喜爱之情；②是从擦一个角度来写，还是从几个角度来写，都可以麦；③写景、写物、写生活情景等等，一定要写浪出夏季的季节特征。 3题，引导学生用心观察周围的人和事，敢于表达真切感受，有自民己独特的体验。 章来源 m create a good atmosphere for education, and to promote the all-round development of students, to establish a scientific moral education full of vigor the For long-term mechanism.Two, the goal of moral education:To guide the students to form the correct world outlook, outlook on life, values, to cultivate students unity and mutual assistance, honest and trustworthy, law-abiding, good quality, hard work, set a good XX students ideological quality, psychological quality and image quality. The formation of excellent moral education curriculum system and management system, the construction of school. The society, family moral education network, to achieve full member education, environment education, education service people, educating people. Traditional moral education initiativesThree, the routine work of moral education:Daily moral education:1, the daily morning exercises or class-break setting-up exercise and discipline inspection and appraisal of public signs;2, daily cleaning and inspection;3, the daily student school appearance, dress, wearing school card check;4, the daily duty guide to the leadership class discipline three rounds.Weekly moral education work:L, the flag raising ceremony and the national flag speech under the flag raising ceremony held on Monday;2, every week a class meeting, the meeting;3, every week two exercises,