连词在书面表达中的作用.pptVIP

What should a good composition be? What do you think of this composition?Is it a good one? If not, what’s the problem? I got up early. I was very happy, it was a fine day. I got to the beach, lots of people had been there. It was very cold, no one complained. Someone shouted: ”Look”, the clouds were turning red . A small part of the sun was appearing .it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea. The clouds and the sea water became red and bright. All were excited to see the sun rising. 1.I got up early. 2.I was very happy. 3.It was a fine day. 4.I got t