公开课-主题句-修改.ppt

* 河源中学 黄李雅 2014-9-24 Task-based Writing Learn to write a topic sentence (I) In the first place, he sets some rules and regulations to inform us of the danger of falling in love. By doing so, students, especially the girls, can protect themselves better. On the other hand, head-teachers are demanded to observe and warn any student who has possibly fallen in love. Furthermore, more equipment such as monitors are installed on campus to supervise(监督) us. To prevent ourselves from puppy love (早恋)，Mr. Deng has taken various measures to achieve his goal. Miss Zou, a charming young lady, always wears a big smile when entering the classroom. After she enters the classroom, she teaches with all her passion and enthusiasm in class, not aware of how time flies. So considerate and kind-hearted is she that she often helps us improve our English even after class, which inspires and encourages us to learn English well. Para 1： Para 2: Miss Zou, possessing many good qualities, has been such a helpful English teacher to us. What makes a good paragraph? A coherent(连贯的) paragraph consists a proper topic sentence and several supporting ideas, which informs the readers of the main idea of the paragraph in a clear way. Step 1: Lead-in 1.Compare the following two paragraphs to judge which has a clearer topic A proper topic sentence has proper t_________(过渡) and shows the t_______ （展现主题内容） of a paragraph. 河源中学2015届摸底考真题复现： 要点1：你读完这个故事（Florence Chadwick）的感受； （1）Having read the story, I realize the power of a goal in one’s success and gives me strength to pursue my goal, despite the hardships I am to go through.  transition theme 2.What is a proper topic sentence ? (The definition) （2）After reading the story, I’m moved by her and she inspires me a lot. From her, I realize that the goal is of great import