雅思范文例句分析[1].pptVIP

雅思范文例句分析 国外部 王琳 国际贸易是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。 international trade public interested in concern The international trade is a topic of public interest and concern. 1，记住习惯表达 2，社会话题的开头句 文化和旅游业之间的关系已经在世界范围内引起了广泛关注。 culture and tourism in the world attention 引起谁关注？是否要提到 people? The relationship between culture and tourism has received a great amount of attention throughout the world. 教育已经成为一个重要产业，它对社会的重要性无可比拟。 education / industry / society 无可比拟？ second to none Education has become an important industry, an industry that is second to none in terms of importance to our society. 套用在任何关键因素身上 最近人们认为，城市扩张对健康有负面影响。 Recently, people think that urban sprawl has negative effects on human health. 1，避免使用“垃圾词汇”，在此省略动词施动者为宜。 2，健康 – health? Urban sprawl has recently been thought to have negative effects on people’s well-being. 在过去的二十年里，环境保护已经上升成为最热门的话题之一。 Over the past twenty years, environmental protection has arisen as one of the hottest topic. 1，套用在任何社会话题中（“之一”） 2，arise (arose arison arising) rise (rose rison rising) raise (raised raised raising) 在这几年里，没什么话题可以像围绕保护动物的争论那样吸引如此之多的注意。 No issue in recent years has drawn as much attention as the debate surrounding animal protection. 通过比较来突出此话题的重要性，适用开头句吸引考官注意 从海外进口蔬菜和水果的好处和坏处将在下面进行讨论。 The pros and cons of importing fruits and vegetables from overseas will be discussed below. 衔接主论断的过渡句 在理解这个观点上，有两点很关键。 Two points are critical in understanding this argument. 我对这个事情有两方面的看法。 I am of mixed opinions about / on this. 有关电脑的使用对小孩子学习上的有力影响，我持支持态度。 the use of computer chlidren’s learning support? I have positive attitudes towards the beneficial effect of using computer on children’s learning. 我认为种族、性别、年龄和残疾歧视都应该被禁止。 r