引语评论作文写作.ppt

引语评论作文（2011年12月新题型）  引语评论作文，有如下特点： 1、全英文给题，无中文提纲； 2、文章给出一句名人名言或是俗语谚语，对其进行评论； 3、文章主题与“人生哲理、优秀品质”相关，不再是以往的校园、学习或社会热点。 很多同学拿到这个没有中文提纲的写作题目之后，无从下手—— 一不知道文章的段落结构怎么安排，二不知道文章的内容怎么去写。 请看写作要求（directions），这篇作文的题目是 Nothing succeeds without a strong will ，写作方式是评论一句幽默的话“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times. 。我们应该从三个角度来“评论”这句话：1.这句话的表面含义；2.这句话带给我们的深层含义 3.这句话带给我们的启发，我们应该如何行动？其实，以上三个角度，就是文章的段落安排了！ 第1段：引语引用+简单评论段（文章的第1、2句；引用题目中给予的原话，并对这句话的表层意思进行评论）  文章第一句话：直接引用引语 　　第一句的第一种写法： 名人名言 　　“ .”Sb. once said. /Sb. once said，“ . ”/ I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said, “ .” 第一句的第二种写法： 俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语 　 As the commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，“ . ”/I assume that you are familiar with the saying, which is commonly-heard , “ . ”/ “ . ” You must have heard it thousands of times from… 文章第二句话：简化引语+表层评论 　 用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂； 本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥。 　　 对引语的表层含义进行评论：就引语的“事”说“事”，不要上升到人生哲理高度。 可用It is obvious that … 例： [2011-12月CET6] 　 Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. It is obvious that a full preparation can help people enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping 例：[2011-12月CET4] Quitting smoking is so easy as long as you keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of cigarette and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. It is obvious that no one can quit smoking with ease without strong will and determination. 第2段：意义阐述段（文章的第3,4,5,6四句话） 文章第三句话：由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义 The saying/proverb/ sb’s remark/sentence aims at informing us of a truth/the significance of A./Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of A. 文章第四句话： 强调A的重要性 There is no denying that we can’t emphasize too much the importance of …. /Why does A. play an indispensable role i