精选英语篇章的等值翻译.pptVIP

例18．It was too steep to hold snow on its sides, but had some in the division ── A Tramp Abroad. 译成汉语：巨石太陡存不住雪(xuě)，只是在裂缝中留下星星点点(diǎn)。 此译文平仄对仗，带跳跃欢快情绪，相反，如译成：“巨石十分陡峭，以致表面存不住雪，但在裂缝中却积存了一些雪”。音韵效果就差多了，因原文的基本情调是欢快的，译文的朗读效果也是欢快的。 例19．a shifting, restless, unstable succession of soft opaline gleams, shimmering over that airy film of white cloud, and turning it into a fabric dainty enough to clothe an angel with. 译成汉语：一束束变幻不定，五光十色的，柔和的光线在白白的云纱上面闪烁、跳动、穿梭，把云纱织成一件精美的衣裳配得上给天使把它披上。 原文前置形容词shifting, restless，在译文中后置为 * 动词“跳动、穿梭”，全句短促有力，音韵铿锵，生动地表现了在白云周围的瞬息万变的光线。 又如《Lenins Death》一文的基本情调是庄严肃穆的， 在译文的节奏音韵效果上，要充分表达这种情调。如描写把列宁灵柩从工会大厦运送到红场这一段。 例20．All is silent. The coffin is closed and carried slowly down the stairway, through the corridors, and out into the windswept streets. out side, a sea of faces, Fluttering red banners against a background of snow. It is the coldest day, they say. Since 1812, but the people have stood in the streets all night. 译成汉语：万籁俱寂，灵柩合上了，被缓慢地抬下楼梯，通过走廊，抬到那寒风凛烈的大街上，外面人山人海，白雪皑皑，红旗招展。据说，这是自一八一二年以来最冷的一天，但人们已在街上站了整整一夜。 把原文两个单部句“outside, a sea of faces, Fluttering * red banners against a background of snow”。译成“外面人山人海(hǎi)，白雪皑皑(ái ái)，红旗招展(zhǎn)”。比译成“外面人山人海，迎风飘动的红旗，映衬着白雪”音韵效果要好得多，突出了单部句的激昂情调。又如： 例21．The bearers were Lenins oldest comrades, those who, under his leadership, in exile, in prison or working illegally, had built up the party which carried through the Revolution and won power for the workers. For seven years, they had withstood, the assaults of counters ──revolution, blockade, famine, civil war and the open hostility of world capitalism. They have won through, as we in Britain will win through. 译成汉语：这些抬灵柩的都是列宁最亲密的同志。他们曾被流放过，坐过牢，干过地下工作，在列宁的领导下，建立了党。这个党经历了革命斗争，为无产阶级赢得了政权。在随后漫长的斗争中，他们抵住了反革命的进攻，帝国主义的封锁，饥饿的折磨，内战 * 的动乱，以及世界资本主义的公开宣战。他们已赢得了胜利，同样我们在英国也会赢得胜利。 这段是描写列宁的亲密战友，跟随列宁历尽千辛万苦，克服重重艰难险阻，战胜各种各样的敌人，终于取得了胜利。这段节奏较快，感情比较激昂，因而译文把原文的第一个长句(其它都是短句),译成三个短句，注意了句与句的排比衔接，朗读起来，激昂奋发