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下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？ Clues：描述一下他们 的不同境遇，并就如 何解决此问题发表你 的看法。 Practice 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 Analysis At present, many people can’t afford heavy medical fees. (Results) Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. What a pity! Protect animals. No buying, no killing. Picture2 People can’t afford heavy medical fees. Picture 3 Picture 4 One false move may lose the game. Look before you leap. Money can’t buy everything. Health is the best wealth. Picutre5 —————— if unexpected can’t foresee protect ourselves buy insurance Picture6 The advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a deadly “if”. Conclusion: When it comes to attitudes towards life, using proper sayings makes sense. Ⅲ.谋篇 ---organization Step1. Description step2. Analysis Step3. Solutions 发现问题 解决问题 分析问题 Step 1 Description （人称/时态） To what degree should we describe the cartoon? ? Organization Example a country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of education As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are… The picture shows a common phenomenon. …… Sentence structures: _______________________________, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits. As is vividly shown in the picture, Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results…) Sentence structures 1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon? 2.It seems very