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高三英语作文指导（上） 一、说明文 说明文是对某事物的特征、功能、结构、本质、用途、原理、来源等进行客观和具体的阐述。目的在于提供知识、表明观点。说明文的说明对象可以是具体的客观事件、人物、自然环境，也可以是某些抽象的东西，比如原理、概念、定律、思想等。说明文的语言特点：1)时态相对较为统一：多用一般现在时； 2)以主动语态、陈述句式为主，为了表达的灵活也可以选用其他表达形式； 3)恰当地使用过渡词语充分体现时间顺序、空间顺序及逻辑顺序work hard at… do sth with great determination and perseverance（毅力）be strict in sth./with sb. have a …way of doing sth try one’s best to do sth. devote oneself to… win a prize/the first prize in …competition be good at… /do well in… make rapid progress in … go through hardship/overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for… 2 评价人物常用短语： one of the best/ most important … set a good example for… a model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of… be honored as (an excellent athlete) His hard work brought him great success.… is the pride of … make great contributions to… be famous/known as remember sb forever 【真题体验】 1. （2008，湖南卷）请从下列任务中选择你 最喜欢的一位，用英语一篇120词左右的短文。要求很具所给信息做适当发挥，且需包括一下三部分内容： 1. 对该任务的简单介绍； 2. 喜欢该任务的理由； 3. 从该任务身上得到的启示。 wisdom Ordinary but great woman; disabled, optimistic; eager to learn Writer; talented; imaginative; man of all ages “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” “…if I have the power of sight for three days.” “Life is a stage…” 【学生习作】 Thomas Edison, a famous American scientist and inventor, had more than 1000 inventions, ①(-2分)one of them is bulb, which changed the world so greatly that the lights in America（-2分）②was turned off for three minutes in memory of him at his death. I admire him because he made so much contribution to the world. Though not blessed with much gift and（-1分）③even thinking to be foolish in teachers’ eyes, he never discouraged himself by difficulties in life, which instead motivated him to pursue his dream. His creativity and diligence made him full of wisdom and paved the way for his final success. （-2分）④Just as he put it, genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. The key to success is not to ask what others can do for