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Training Guide Unit4 Training of Writing a Suggestion Letter Training Goals.(训练目标) 通过本节课的训练，同学们要达到以下目标： 1、明确一篇高分作文须具备哪些条件。 2、明确完成一篇命题作文的步骤。 3、根据Unit 4的话题，学会写建议信。 TaskⅠ Compare the following letters and tell what a good composition is like. 作文要求：请同学们针对Amy的烦恼写一封回信，给她提出建议，帮她解决烦恼。字数60-80词。 Dear students, I am not happy these days. I have some problems. Firstly, Im angry with my husband and argue with him a lot because he doesnt help with housework. Secondly, I cant sleep very well at night, so I feel tired in the day time and I make a lot of mistakes in class. I think Im too stressed out. What should I do? Could you give me some advice, my dear students? Yours Amy 评价下列两篇范文 Which one do you think is better? Why? Group work. 1. 四人合作，找出并纠正文中错误。 2. 参照评分标准，分别确定两篇短文得分，并说明理由。 评分标准： 一档 9-10分 二档 7-8分 三档 5-6分 四档 4分以下 内容、要点是否符合命题要求 符合要求并有适当拓展 符合要求并有适当拓展 内容要点有部分缺失 内容要点严重缺失 段落结构是否清晰，是否使用合适的连词 段落清晰连词适合 段落较清晰连词较适合 段落不清晰无合适连词 段落不清晰无合适连词 语言是否丰富准确 语言丰富准确 较丰富准确 不丰富 有个别错误 错误较严重 字数是否符合要求 符合要求 符合要求 字数略有不足 字数严重不足 TaskⅡ Write a suggestion letter. “建议信”的基本模式 Dear ..., Heading (To tell why you write this letter) After I read your letter, Im sorry to know that... Im writing to share my advice with you. I would like to share ... Don’t worry, I think I can help you. I know you have trouble...and I would like to... ... Body (To give your advice) Firstly...Secondly...Then...Next...Finally... After that... As for... Besides...What’s more... Because, so that, if... You’d better... Why don’t you... I think you could... Maybe you should... It’s better for you to... It’s important for you to... ...is helpful. ...may help a lot. ... Ending (To tell your expects, wishes or hopes) I hope that everything will be fine. I hope these suggestions may help you out. I hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful. Please write to me if you need more help. I c