高考作文20130725.ppt

2013-07-25 The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a famous pianist. The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. You can see panda only in China. Only in China can you see panda. It is only in China that you can see panda. Tom likes apple, and Jack likes it too. Not only Tom but also Jack likes the apple. 练习: 翻译下列句子 1.他虽然有病, 但是还是上学去了. 2.汤姆很穷, 而他的弟弟却发了财. 3.他丢了工作, 因此这些天心情不好. 4.韩惠不但歌唱得好, 而且舞也跳得好. 5.我本打算昨天告诉你, 但你不在办公室. 练习: 改正下面句子, 使之成为正确的一句话 Faulty: There are forty-five students in our class , one- third of them are from nearby countries. It was raining hard, they could not work in the field. The professor walked into the classroom, he carried a bag of books with him. 句子的连贯 Faulty: A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. Faulty: The idea he mentioned at first sounded good. 试比较下列改写的句子. Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting? Look out for cars while you are crossing the street? 2.避免使用同义词重复.(如下面的这些句子, 划线部分重复, 应删掉). 1).He is blind in both eyes. He is blind in the left eye. 2).In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible. 3).The desk is round in shape and red in color. 4).I shall accompany my mother by going with her to the market. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 1. He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. 2. The Great Wall, which has a history of more than 2000 years, is one of the world heritages. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 3. He attended the party though he was badly ill. 4. Nie Er, who is the composer of the National Anthem for the People’s Republic of China, was born in Yunnan in February 1912. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 5.He suggested that he be sent to tend the sick. 6.To my surprise, I was surprised to find no one there when I got there. 7.A teacher who has experience should have an idea about what he should do in such a condition. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 8. Do you know the girl who is dress