高考书面表达：如何使文章“靓”起来.ppt

1)她睡着了，灯还亮着。 She fell asleep______________________. 2) 种了很多花，我们学校呈现出新的面貌。 ________________________，our school took on a new look. 3)不要满嘴巴食物说话。 Don’t speak _________________________. 4)由于无事可做，我就看了一部电影。 _________________ , I saw a movie. * Clothes make the man. 人要衣装，佛要金装。 Beauty is the combination of three-tenths of gift and seven-tenths of grooming. 三分长相，七分打扮。 如何 使文章 起来 “靓” 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 2. 使用较丰富的句式 abundant sentence patterns proper conjunctions advanced words and phrases 使文章“靓”起来的技巧 → on the way / around the corner . The weekend is coming . Nowadays, people think education is very important . → be of great importance / significance attach great importance to 一、使用较高级的词汇 短语优先 Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather，… The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free of charge for the students there. You can find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble \ difficulty finding my house. A good idea occurred to / struck me. I had a good idea. I came up with a good idea. 我想到了 一个好主意。 弃旧取新 二、使用较丰富的句式 用高级和多样化的句式来表达，能增加文章的文采。 在文章中设计双重否定的句子，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。 → I couldn’t have made so much progress in English without his help. The postman never fails to come on time every day. The postman comes on time every day. I have made great progress in English with his help. 肯定不如双否好 　倒装是一种简单易行提亮句子的方法。 The children won’t come home until it is dark . → Not until it is dark will the children come home. You can improve your English only in this way . → Only in this way can you improve your English. Although he is a child , he can manage it. → Child as he is , he can manage it. 陈述不如倒装妙 适当使用被动语态，会呈现句型的变化，使句子表达地道丰富。 同学们在这个问题上观点不同。 Students have different opinions on this question. Opinions are divided on this ques