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六级写作突破 To start with, smoking endangers people’s health. As we all know, tobacco contains many toxic substances such as nicotine and tar. That is to say, if you are a heavy smoker, you are more likely to suffer from chronic diseases. For instance, you may cough, have a sore throat or experience eye irritation. A recent study conducted by Tsing-Hua University shows that smoking may cause some respiratory problems. To be more precise, smokers may develop lung cancer. Statistics show that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has increased sharply over the past five years. 首先，吸烟危害人们健康。正如我们所知，烟草中含有许多有毒物质，如尼古丁和焦油。也就是说，如果你是个烟鬼，你更可能患上一些慢性疾病。例如，你可能会咳嗽，咽喉肿痛或者眼睛不适。医学研究已经证实，吸烟容易导致一些呼吸道疾病。说得具体一些，吸烟者可能得肺癌。数据表明，在过去五年里，与吸烟相关的疾病发病率急剧上升。） 有研究表明 According to a recent survey conducted by Professor Davie at Tsing-Hua University in 2009，........................ A recent study conducted by Professor Davie at Tsing-Hua University shows(替换见后) that................ 越来越多的人看电视 精心准备“闪光词汇”和“闪光句型” 看电视浪费时间 六级写作突破之——“十大黄金法则” 吸烟的利弊 写作合理分配时间 审题3min（想好开头、想词、想替换） 写作20~25min 检查2min （10分之差，拼写是否正确，标点，时态） 评分标准 阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分 2分 ——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分 ——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分 ——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。(57分) 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。（78） 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（100） 写作基本要求 脉络清晰（一般分3段） 用词丰富 书写整洁 对比论证型 对在校大学生同居的看法 1. 有些人持反对意见。 2. 有些人表示支持。 3. 我的看法…… 对比论证型 个性化模板范例2 Recent years have witnessed a growing tendency of college students cohabit when they are still in their study periods. It?has?been?shown?on?TV?or?on?the newspaper?that??approximately 13.45% of young people are willing to live together before their marriages. Whether or not the college students should be allowed to cohabit has?aroused?peoples?wide?concern, different people take?diverse?attitudes?towards this hot issue. 黄金句型三：With the rapid developmet of 扩展 1、从无到有，适合新事物 黄金句型三：With the rapid developmet of 扩展 2、从低级到高级，适合事物的发展和优化 黄金句型三：With the rapid dev