初中英语写作课训练课件展示My favorite season2.ppt

2010年杭州萧山房地产市场专题研究报告品管七大手法讲义教程桥梁工程识图讲义桥梁组成与结构课件确定性推理讲义 * Ⅷ 写作﹙10分﹚ 请根据所给的话题写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢 的季节。你可以从该季节的活动等方面谈起。 字数50个左右。 My favorite season is My favorite season My favorite season is spring. Because in spring, the weather turns warm, the trees turn green, the flowers start to come out. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. In spring, it often rains. I like the rain. And in spring, I can plant trees on the hill. Spring is the first season in a year. People often feel very happy. It makes me happy, too. So I like spring best. ----老师．俺们这次写的咋样啊？ ----整体不错，有进步。 存在问题： 1. 句式问题。如陈妮娜的， 2 结构问题，如孙悦的。 3.不打草稿，涂抹，潦草。或应付作文，乱抄短文。 下面分别讲解、处理。 My favorite season is spring. In spring, the sky is blue , the air is fresh and the river is clean. We can plant more trees in spring we can go hiking in spring and we can go fishing in spring . Spring is the best season of the year. And morning is the best time of the day. So I Always read new words in the morning . Then I can remember them. What a beautiful season! Ij like spring very much , what about you? Would you like to share with me? Let’s be friends! ﹙孙悦﹚ My favorite season is winter. Why? Because ﹙可删除﹚ in the winter we can use the snow makes ﹙to make﹚ snowmen and can with my friends to throw snowball each other ﹙ throw snowball to each other with my friends ﹚. What’s more, we can also lisit is covered world by snowy　﹙The whole world is covered by snow﹚. The write is everywhere ﹙Everywhere is white.﹚ . Many children step on the snow make ﹙and play﹚ different kinds of games . These make me fe