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四六级备考月写作大作战范文赏析 ?来源：沪江部落??评论：1? 收藏 8 编辑点评：为帮助大家更好地掌握写作技巧，沪江网校近期举行了四六级写作大作战活动，目前活动已圆满结束，我们一起来欣赏活动中部分沪友的写作作品及网校名师点评吧！四级作文题目： Directions: For thispart, you are allowed?30?minutes to write an essay. You should start your essaywith a brief description of the picture and then express your views onwater pollution. You should write at least?120?words but no more than?180?words. 沪友四级作文： 沪友ID：卿小萱 In this picture it show us about two fishes dialogue. We can know the water was not so fresh because the fishes cant live in there more than three days. From this short dialogue in picture we need though, why