英语四级、高考写作作文短语、词汇和技巧.docVIP

高分作文标志:1：是否长短句交叉2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；?5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) at this time; next；previously; simultaneously同时地; eventually； to begin with；to start with；to end with；finally；seeing...由于，因为；since then；first of all；afterwards后来; following this; preceding先前的 ;originally最初的ultimate最终的，极限的，根本的：at once; immediately; at length终于，最后; in the mean time同时; in the end; not long after; finally; some time ago; at present; all of a sudden突然; from this time on; from time to time; since then; whenever; next point; a few minutes later; formerly; as; once; since; occasionally偶然地; in a moment; shortly立刻; whereupon于是，因此; previouslythe moment, in the end, before long, afterwards，earlier， in a few (more) days，gradually，等。 表示罗列增加： at the outset(在开始时)，following this; at this time; now; at this point; afterward后来; subsequently后来; consequently所以，因此; before this; previously; preceding this; simultaneously同时地; concurrently(同时发生的)also，and，and then，too，in addition，furthermore，moreover again，on top of that/this，another，（或者firstly, secondly, thirdly or last but not the least） 表示解释说明： in addition， for example， for instance， in this case， moreover furthermore， for example/instance，in this/that case， that is, that is to say, in other wor