高考：英语书面表达写作模板.ppt

高考解读 《考试说明》中高考英语书面表达对考生的要求:根据所给的情景和要求写一篇短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等；其特点为：A. 提供完整信息；B. 提供部分信息，其余让考生联想；C. 不提供信息，完全依靠考生的观点和联想。 评分原则 准确使用语法和词汇。 准确把握英汉表达习惯的差异，用地道的英语表达方式准确的表情达意 内容充实，语言正确，句子连贯，用次贴切。 特别关注： 段落明。 字数恰当。 字体清晰，工整，力求没有涂改痕迹。 地道的过渡语。 不遗漏要点。 不犯时态错误。 图表类书面表达 图表类书面表达往往给考生提供一份统计图表和简单的文字表述，让考生根据统计图表所提供的数据，结合文字提示及试题的注意事项和要求，写一篇说明事实或反映一种现象的短文。写这样的文章时，我们首先要读懂其中的符号和数字所代表的意思；其次，从图表的整体着手，认真分析数据，抓住主要特征，然后归纳出主题。 南京市2009届高三第一次调研测试 自1978年以来，我国海外留学生回国人数逐年上升。请在Shanghai Daily上发表一篇文章，根据图表叙述海外人员归国情况，分高考资源网析回流原因，并希望更多的海外学者回国创业。 要求： 1）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ?2）词数：150字左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入词数。 参考词汇：制定政策 work out policies????? 海归人员 returnee There has been a reversal of the brain drain since 1978 across the country. 第一段： 1. 笼统概括图表所反映的现象： As can be seen from the chart, great changes have been taking place in…____________(在…方面） 2. 具体分析： 表示上升： By the year 2006, the number of _____(做某事)has reached up / increased/gone up / risen to/by…（达到多少） 表示下降： The number of people who...has dropped /dreased /come down /reduced to…. 3. 进一步分析： Between …and …, about 7000 people （做某事）. They account for about 百分数of all…. The year 2008 has witnessed a boom / a sharp decrease. 第二段： 说明原因： There are three main factors leading to this change. (The phenomenon arises from three facts) For one thing…, For another thing…, In addition, another factor contributes to such change… There has been a reversal of the brain drain since 1978 across the country. Between 1978 and 2007, about 7,000 overseas Chinese returned to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. They accounted for about 25% of all returnees nationwide. The year 2008 has witnessed a boom. The number of returnees came up to 15,000. By the end of 2010, a further 22,000 will have returned to this city. The reversal of the brain drain mainly arises from three facts. Firstly, our government values overseas Chinese scholars highly, encourage them to return home to start their own careers and has worked out a series of prefer