高考英语写作指导课课件---副本.ppt

5．门票收入支付园林工人工资﹑购买新花木。 The income from entrance fees is used to pay the gardeners and buy new plants and flowers． ＝The money from entrance fees is made use of to pay garden workers and buy new plants． ＝With money from entrance fees, the gardeners are paid and new plants as well as young trees are bought． （With的短语）（被动句） Dear Editor, Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Without doubt, Charging entrance fees will keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. * Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1991年生；籍贯：广东。 Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1991. 2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞, 男，10岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and in a white jacket. 如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。 With the help of Tom, we soon found their village. 4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。 They were standing under the big tree, waiting for the president. Standing under the big tree, they were waiting for the President. 3)借助介词短语做状语 II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句： 如：他给我很多钱，我不要。 I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you. 如：我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。 He gave me a lot of money but I refused. III. 用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句： 1) 名词性从句 如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。 That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry. 2) 定语从句 如：中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。 China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources. I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in o