英语四级写作常见错误分析和高分作文405.ppt

定从 The girl, who is elected as the “Campus Beauty”, is a senior student. * fhfh 定语从句 The students are from Bodybuilding Club. Bodybuilding Club is the best club in the university. * fhfh 定语从句 The students are from Bodybuilding Club ， which is the best club in the university. * fhfh I bought the house. ---主句 which once belonged to my neighbor. ---从1 in which my neighbor has lived for 30 years. ---从2 which is one of the most beautiful buildings in the town. ---从3 One room of which is used as my reading room now. ---从4 * fhfh 状语从句 希望至少有： Because When Although So…that * fhfh 兼职对全日制学生有用，因为他们不但能赚到钱，而且还可以获得职业经验。 Part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they not only earn money but also gain career experience. * fhfh * fhfh 绝招1 介词With是王牌 1.With表伴随状态： Premier Li keqiang again visited Hunan, with state television showing pictures of him telling provincial officials to do all they could to restore power and other services. * fhfh 绝招1 练习 Jet Li is a super star. Many of his movies are popular in the world. * fhfh Jet Li is a super star， with many of his movies popular in the world. * fhfh * fhfh 刘翔站在天安门广场上，手持火炬。 Liu Xiang is standing on the Tiananmen square, with the Olympic torch in his hand. Liu Xiang is standing on the Tiananmen square, Olympic torch in hand. * fhfh 练习 一位美女从我身边经过，面带微笑。 A beauty passed by, with a smile on her face. * fhfh 绝招2：主谓分割 Seattle is a garden city, with one of the most delightful climate in the world. * fhfh * fhfh 由上表可见，从2012年12月开始，四级作文已摆脱给提纲的模式，写作要求通过简单的提示给出，这就要求考生懂得通过阅读写作提示来把握写作主题、内容与形式。 就话题而言，四级写作主要涉及社会热点、校园生活和日常生活。主题涵盖了教育、环保、学习、就业、友情、手机、互联网等。就体裁而言，四级写作体裁主要有三种：论说文、描写文和应用文。其中，论说文有两种特殊出题方式，图画和图表。论说文占大多数，是考查的重点，描写文与应用文近年来比例有所提升，应该引起足够重视。 应用文在最近八年里分别于2012年12月，2016年6月，2017年6月出现了三次，分别是申请信、感谢信与广告。考察次数明显增多，应予以一定重视。大家应了解常用的应用文类型与其写作特点与格式，如家信、求职信、倡议书、申请书、感谢信、祝贺信、邀请信、招聘启事、销售广告等。 * fhfh 高分作文 词汇准确多样 句式复杂有力 * fhfh 2个注意点 1、写作中两类避免使用的单词 口语词 You know, well hey man, what up? gonna wanna 生僻词(也别用太大了，考官不认识怎么办） * fhfh It pays to Be H