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情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，你的美国笔友Tom发来邮件，询问你目前的学习和生活情况以及毕业后的打算。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 给他回一封邮件。 注意：1. 词数不少于60； 2. 参考词汇：高考 The National College Entrance Examination; 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。 写作要求 文章扣题 内容充实（全面、有细节支撑） 结构完整 逻辑性强 语义连贯 评分原则 先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 应考虑内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。 评分细则 内容全面，4个要点都有正确表述，且都有必要的细节支撑，语言达意，确为二档。根据语言质量，升一档或降档； 漏写一个要点（一图），降至四档（6-11分）。语言质量出色，升至且只能升至12分； 漏写两个要点（两图），降至五档（1-5 分）。语言质量出色，升至且只能升至6分； 漏写三个要点（三图），最多给2分； 细节支持不够，在相应档次上得低分； 时态、人称的使用得当与否视为判断语言质量高低的依据； 逻辑不通，相应降一档。 1 2 3 4 内容要点和细节及逻辑 1．课上, 努力学习(忙于备考)——上课认真听讲、做笔记 2．课下, 锻炼身体——跑步、踢球（多种运动） 3．家中和校内, 得到关怀——妈妈送水、老师鼓励 4．理想: 当医生——考入医科大学 学生习作1： I’m now studying in Grade 3, Class 1, Hong Xing High School, studying hard to prepared for the coming National College Entrance Examination. In the daytime, as you know, most of my time is occupied by different kinds of lessons and school work. However, the school life is not only busy but sometimes also filled with happiness. In my spare time, I often enjoy running and playing soccer with my classmates. In the evening, my homework often keeps me up until midnight. And my mum always comes into my room with a cup of tea or hot water in her hand, encouraging me to do my best. I believe that the more effort I make, the better grades I get. As a result, I improved a lot in the last exam and got a prize presented by my teacher. As for the future job, I really want to become a doctor who can help people out form the terrible illness. What about you, Tom? How is your school life ? 学生习作2： Now I’m a student facing the National Entrance Examination. So my life is quite busy and challenging. Everyday, I have a lot of work to do. As you know, my math is not good, so I spend lots of my time studying math with my classmates. In the math class, I try my best to follow my teacher and to solve every problem I met. Although I have to do many homework, I still arrange time to do exercise everyday.