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书面表达阅卷体会 　　笔者怀着无比神圣的责任感，参加了今年的高考阅卷。整体的感受是阅卷组工作严谨认真，勤奋高效，客观公正。第一、二天是正式评卷前的试评培训。在此期间，评卷老师们认真研读和学习了阅卷纪律、保密条例和作文评分细则。为了确保对每一个考生公正，评卷组对评分标准进行了反复又耐心的培训，不厌其烦，精益求精。 中国论文网 /1/viewhtm　　全国乙卷作文的评分总则： 　　1. 本题总分25分，按五个档次给分。 　　2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容要点和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 　　3. 词数少于80或多于120的，从最后得分中减去2分。这一点湖北的高考阅卷组处理得比较灵活。如有的考生写的是：Dear Ms Jenkins， I am Li Hua， one of your students. I am writing to ask you for help. I am going to a foreign company to do a part time job. I have written an application and my resume， but I am not sure whether they are right. Would you please help me correct the errors in them and what the right form is？ Thank you so much！ Yours Li Hua，阅卷组认为这篇文章达到了出题人的交际要求，语言流畅，运用正确，就给了及格分，且没有额外扣2分。但是如果写的短文不能传情达意，或者语言毫无章法，并且还存在字数严重不足的问题，则按及格分以下第一、二、三档的相应标准进行评分，视具体情况额外扣分。 　　4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的准确和丰富，上下文的连贯和表达的得体。 　　5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。错误书写每3个单词从总分中减去一分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不累计。英美拼写和词汇用法均可接受。标点符号的错误，将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。 　　6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 　　下面分别是五个不同档次的考生作文。 　　A This my resume. I am 18 year. I am write this for you. I like football. I am clevers boy. I am student. I like computer gam. I like this work. I am conviced that live to your enpectations. No matter what happine I will back myself. I have a dream. If you are ablt to give me the work. I will tank you. Please you help me exchange format. 　　B I want to get a part time job in an company this summer holiday. Because I need the pay money to buy something for myself. 　　I have finished the applyment and resume， but I don’t know if the words or format are true. So I want if you are free， please help me to check the format， I think it is easy for you. 　　I am looking forward to your repair. And then， I will send the resume to you by this e-mail. Thanks for your kindness. 　　C My name is Li Hua. In this holiday， I want to find a part-time job. In the company， I write the resume and I want you help me look at the word and format， that I will have changed. 　　As time goes by， I fin