优化英语句子四种常用方法.docVIP

优化英语句子的四种常用方法 　　近几年广东高考基础写作命题形式以文字提纲的形式出现。它的特点就是所给材料含有的信息比较多，但写作要求是只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。单一地用某种句型，文章就显得平淡乏味。如果在这五句话中所包含的句子结构能做到多样，那么，这篇文章显得就很漂亮了。 　　要让一篇文章的句式多样，其实并不难。在写作时，我们常用到的有以下几种方法： 　　一、运用同位语 　　此方法常用于介绍人或事物。 　　[例1]李敏是个女孩子，今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习，她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。 　　[一般]Li Ming is a girl. She is 18. She is my neighbour and my best friend. She is studying in Guanghua Middle School. 　　[高级]Li Ming, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best friend, is studying in Guanghua Middle School. 　　[运用]用同位法整合下面的句子。 　　1. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the cultural and economical center of Guangdong Province. 　　________________________________________________________________________ 　　2. Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year. 　　________________________________________________________________________ 　　二、运用并列句 　　常用的并列连词有and, but, or, otherwise, nor, so, yet, however, for, as well as, both...and, not only...but also, either...or, neither...nor, (and)then, since等。 　　[例2]他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。 　　[一般]He doesn’t like music. He doesn’t like sports, either. 　　[高级]He likes neither music nor sports. 　　[例3]我不喜欢他，他很自私。 　　[一般]I don’t like him. He is selfish. 　　[高级]I don’t like him, for he is selfish. 　　[运用]用连接词整合下列句子。 　　3. He works hard himself. He encourages us to work hard, too. 　　________________________________________________________________________ 　　4. These glasses are very expensive. Please be careful with them. 　　________________________________________________________________________ 　　三、运用短语 　　根据具体情况我们可以用现在分词、过去分词，介词短语、不定式短语等。 　　[例4]我很惊讶，一切进展得那么顺利。 　　[一般]I was surprised. Everything went on very well. 　　[高级]To my surprise, everything went on well. 　　[例5]她回到舞厅。他寻找丢失的项链。 　　[一般]She went back. She wanted to find her lost necklace. 　　[高级]She went back to find her lost necklace. 　　[例6]故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语初学者的欢迎。 　　[一般]The stories are written in simple Englis