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杀器二：用定语从句表达功能 Being considered as something important/necessary, + 表示事物优点的简单句。 Only in this way can + 表示造成的结果的简单句。 杀器五：用if条件状语从句表达展望 三大暗器（衔接词）：therefore（因此），besides（而且），however（但是）。 1.简单句的写作秘技—让你入门，学好基本功。 2.复杂句的五大杀器—高级武功，跨入高手行业。 3.三个基本衔接词—炉火纯青，世上少有对手。 （任何作文你基本都可以KO了！） 现在我们来KO任意作文 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是李明，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：? 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；?? 2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比） 学沫版范文 Dear Sir or Madam， It is clear that many people like the activity in Shanghai. I will say my idea in two parts. If you have the activity in the library, many people will like the idea. The library is near our houses. Only in this way can you have many people in the activity. The activity will be good in the library. Besides, the library is a good place that can make people like reading. Therefore, people will like drawing in the library. ?Being considered as something important, the activity will be popular in the future. ????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,???????????????????????????????????? Li Ming 现在该你一试身手了! 如何选择朋友（不少于80字） 要点： 1、朋友的重要性 2、选择朋友的标准 * * * 简单句的写作 一、作文必备三大句核 1. S. + Vi 2. S. + Vt. + O. 3. S. + Link-V. + P. 二、句子的灵魂——动词V. 三、be动词——替补 四、浇花——形容词、介词短语 复杂句写作技巧——将简单句浇花成复杂句 浇花材料 1、形容词/单个V-ing/单个V-ed 3、V-ing短语/V-ed短语 4、从句 2、介词短语 定于从句 同位语从句 主语从句 状语从句 中国有了话语权。 中国有了更多话语权。 中国在国际事务中有了更多话语权。 China has the right to act as a spokesman. China has more rights to act as a spokesman. China has more rights to act as a spokesman in international?Affairs. 随着经济的发展，中国在国际事务中有了更多话语权。 随着经济的发展，中国这个发展中的大国在国际事务中有了更多话语权。 With the development of its economy, China has more rights to act as a spokesman in international?Affairs. With the development of its economy, China, which is a big developing country, has more rights to act as a spokesman in international?Affairs. 杀器一：用主语从句表述事实 It is clear/obvious that + 表示事实的简单句。 很显然，吸烟不但对吸烟者本身，而且对其他人都有危害。 It is clear that smoking does harm to