定语从句写作.pptxVIP

定语从句的写作 寿光市圣都中学 王健 定语从句的写作 高考作文要想达到优秀档(22-25分)，必需要有高级句式，比如强调句，倒装句，主从复合句，或者 是运用了一些非谓语结构。 1.关系代词引导的定语从句 关系代词who,whom,whose,that,which,as 引导的定 语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which 和as引导的非 限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。 People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes, which are the special food for this festival. 写作中常用的几种定语从句 2.关系副词引导的定语从句 关系副词引导的定语从句是指when,where,why 引导 的定语从句。 The reason why I don’t trust him is that he often tell lies. 3. 介词+ which/whom引导的定语从句 I’d like to attend English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. 定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢 尝试的复杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”。 定语从句的写法 第一步：写出两个简单句 第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇， 这个词在 两个简单句中都有。 第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意引导词的选择。 示例 去海边度假是个好主意。在那里我们可以享受阳光，蓝天和新鲜空气。 第一步：写出两个简单句 It is a good idea to go to the seaside for a holiday. We can enjoy sunshine,blue sky and fresh air there. 第二步：然后找出简单句中的重叠词汇: the seaside; there 第三步：最后用相应的关系词连接 It is a good idea to go to the seaside for a holiday, where we can enjoy sunshine and fresh air. 定语从句写作中的几点注意事项 1.误用关系词 误： I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. 正： I live in Beijing, which is the capital of China. 2.句子残缺 误：There were many students took part in the English competition. 正: There were many students who took part in the English competition. 3. 有多余词 误：The film I saw it last night was really very good. 正： The film I saw last night was really very good. 4. 定语从句与并列句的混淆 误：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people’s health. 正：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which/ and it does great harm to people’s health. Thank you